00:11:747 (4,1) - the pattern should change into something that moves easier because it transitions to antiflow after hdash that also uses an unorthodox movement
00:55:997 (1,1) - spinner trap, you could fully avoid this by making the gap 1/1 and moving 00:58:397 (1) - more near the center
01:55:397 (1,2,3) - this section could play a bit better if you make 01:55:847 (3) - horizontal, pointing right. right now i find it a little awkward to read and hit
02:17:597 (1) - you could add a hyperdash for this to emphasise the cymbal and stay consistent with how you mapped hyperdashes for other cymbals in this section (02:15:197 (1) - 02:19:997 (1) - 02:22:397 (1) - )