00:03:241 (1,2) - just gonna have 1 mod here for every 1/1 slider you should have. Having 1/1 circle rhythm is very underwhelming for the start of the song, as well as its just as spaced as 00:03:872 (3,4). This can cause reading errors for players and make a very unpleasant playing experience, i suggest changin every 1/1 rhythm gap that is circles, to 1/1 sliders as it will give your map of a flow and not this stop and go sorta thing
00:23:451 (1) - 00:33:557 (7) this whole section is waaaaaay to dense compared to the the start of the song, honestly, what you did there is how the beginning should be and vise versa. You want less intense sections to be more calm, not the other way around.