00:25:128 (25128|3,25378|2,25628|1,25878|0,26128|1,26378|2) - in this part, I suggest you change the short lns and make them single notes instead to represent the vocals
same goes with this
00:47:878 (47878|0,48128|1,48378|2,48628|3) -
and go through the chart carefully to catch the other inconsistencies that I did not mentioned.
and subjectively this 00:59:628 (59628|0,59878|1,60128|2,60378|3) -