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00:04:765 (4765|3) - this should end on the blue tick to be consistent with 00:06:848 - and 00:03:515 - etc.

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no, theres a clear difference in vocal length/cutoff

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00:16:223 (16223|2) - This should be an LN to be consistent with the other vocals

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yes

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00:23:515 (23515|0) - move this to col 2 for nicer patterning

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no that would defeat the purpose of the jack for the toms

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00:24:556 (24556|0,24556|3) - im curious about the intent of this vocal use of double notes.

00:24:140 ~ 00:43:306 - no double notes are used for the vocal during the duration of this part, only double notes focused on the instrumental expression.

i would suggest removing the 00:24:556 - 4col notes, as this could be a consistent issue if this is not your intention.

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yes this is a mistake on my part

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00:25:806 - 00:29:348 - 00:32:473 - 00:39:140 - 00:41:015 - why not add notes here? to fill the gap in top diff

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00:32:265 (32265|3) - would extend to 00:32:890 - cuz that's where the sound ends

also 00:31:432 - can potentially add a LN here for vocal

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sure

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00:32:890 (32890|0,33306|0,33723|0) - in my opinion you can structure this section nicer to avoid repeating col 1.

This structure works nicely and also follows vocal PR as well!

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prefer to keep, feels off having the two long lns on the same col like that

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00:37:369 - can definitely add a note here for the snare. Col 3 works best

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keep current, i dont do it places like 00:40:598 - either so it shouldnt be a problem for this section

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00:40:598 (40598|1) - for vocals, you have been using possible LN to express them, so you can continue to use 1/4 LN for this vocal as well.

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00:42:890 - can see why u kept it single but still have a strong sound here despite no vocal so id suggest to add
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yeah did something like that https://prnt.sc/fVYt23Uly-KR

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00:50:598 - I would make this a single LN as there's no impactful sound besides the piano you're following

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i dont see the problem here ngl, theres a high pitch sound here same as 00:50:390 (50390|0) -

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01:03:931 (63931|0) - This part can be rearranged to flow nicely and also to follow nice vocal PR.

Vocals can be moved to 1-2-3-4 to represent the rising intensity of the vocals and the patterning can be changed to flow alot nicer using this pattern instead

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cool idea but want to keep as is because i want to keep 01:03:723 (63723|0,63931|0) -

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01:17:473 - note needed here for the piano since you have notes at 01:19:140 - 01:19:973

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yes

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01:18:723 (78723|2,78931|1,79556|3,79765|0) - for the current vocal LN, 01:17:056 (77056|1,77265|2,77890|0,78098|3) - which has a mirror pattern of the vocal LN directly below it.

so, if move this piano sound to 1col at 01:19:140 (79140|3) - it will be more symmetrical and have a cleaner pattern at 01:17:473 (77473|3,79140|3) - which is what u want.

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sure

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01:24:805 (84805|1,85350|2) - rather than creating a staircase pattern in one direction, it seems like a good idea to break the pattern once or twice to match the changing piano pitch.

how about ctrl+h?

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sure

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