00:43:168 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - Just don spam, I would just introduce patterns in the first stream like you did here 00:48:858 (240,241,242,243,244,245) or just do other patterns
00:44:410 (203,204,258,259) - gap here even though the beat is going and in the same part 00:47:720 (229,230,231,232,233) - you did put notes here, I recommend just filling those gaps
03:08:093 (224,225,226,227,228,229,230,231,232) - only dons, but the music is changing and most of the times leaving 9dons stream is not the best option, I would change this to ddddkkkkD
03:16:902 (297) - same color finisher on tripple is too hard, 03:17:039 (298,299,300) - you use kats on this weird voice sound and the same sound happens 03:16:357 (293,294) - so I would put kats on those also and just remove 03:16:834 (296) :3
03:16:902 (297) - fixed
03:16:357 (293,294) - here is no voice sound after 296 note, and 03:17:039 (298,299,300) - here is. You can hear it in this video https://streamable.com/uq264a
03:16:357 (293,294) - here is no voice sound after 296 note, and 03:17:039 (298,299,300) - here is. You can hear it in this video, yeah that's what I meant, to change those all to kats since you have them with kats here 03:17:046 (299,300,301), and I would've kept the finisher at 03:16:909 (298)
04:23:623 (694,695,696,697,698,699,700) - song is changing but 7kats in a row and that part is really hard, and those finishers right afterwards are hard after a stream like that, I changed the stream to ddkkddkdkdkdkkkkD and I think it fits nicely, you can change it to that
04:24:409 (702) - finisher in middle of the stream is too hard 04:24:409 (702,704,706) - also these have the same sound, so maybe just change 04:24:409 (702,704) to don finishers and delete 04:24:330 (701,703,705) like you have here 04:29:435 (750,751,752)
04:33:283 (786,787) - this doesn't emphasize anything and feels very random, would change them to kats and 04:32:576 (777,781,785,789) to dons because in these parts there is that drum beat, same thing here 06:02:981 (1507,1508,1509,1510,1511,1512,1513,1514,1515,1516,1517,1518,1519,1520,1521)
04:43:571 (878,879,880,881,882,883,884,885,886) - it feels like you're trying to emphasise the voice but these 04:44:042 (884,886) are missed to emphasize, would change it to kkkkddkdk. Same thing here 06:14:133 (1610,1611,1612,1613,1614,1615,1616,1617,1618)
04:53:387 (971,972,973,974) - this change doesn't make sense since you're focusing on the voice but it was the same and this is not on beat, would change the stream to kdkkkkddddkkkkd so it emphasizes on 04:52:524 (960,962) and just changes color on the beat from then
05:04:068 (1067,1068) - this doesn't emphasize the voice here 05:04:147 (1068,1070), so maybe just change 05:04:068 (1067) to kat and 05:04:225 (1069) to don
05:23:832 (1213,1214,1215,1216,1217,1218,1219,1220,1221) - missplaced finishers in here, 05:24:618 (1218,1220) - remove finisher, 05:24:461 (1217,1221) - add finisher