Simple English corrections: メイドノココロハ アヤツリドール in English should be The Maid’s Heart is a Puppet instead of Maid heart is a puppet. あよ/森羅万象 should have a "x" in between both of the English and Japanese artists names such as, "あよx森羅万象" and "Ayo x ShinRa-Bansho" should be correctly adjusted along with the change from ShinRa-BanSho to ShinRa-Bansho and the change from lowercased ayo to Ayo. If you have any use of the English translation of the lyrics or song in general, I would revert to this site (despite it being a unofficial translation, it seems pretty accurate to me): https://releska.com/2018/09/15/the-maids-heart-is-a-puppet/
我草，你也来了，牛逼！十分感谢！！！！！！！！！！！！
WTH, bro? THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(He is a high level player, at least better than me, in malody)
YEA YUNOMI! But this is made by ShinRo-Bansho, one of my favorites
Timing: Making sure the main beat of the song lines up with the main white line exactly. The offset of the first timing point should be changed from 621 to 645. 
Note: An offset which is wrong for more than 5ms is unrankable, so it's important to make sure it's accurate.