00:42:408 (42408|3,42408|1,42543|2,42543|0,42677|2,42677|1,42677|0,42677|3) -
This doesn't math the previous triple-note jacks you used to represent this sound, please fix
00:15:159 (15159|2,15159|3,15159|0,15159|1,15429|2,15429|1,15564|2,15564|3,15564|0,15564|1,15834|2,15834|1,15969|2,15969|3,15969|0,15969|1,16239|3,16239|2,16373|2,16373|1,16508|2,16508|3,16508|0,16508|1,16778|2,16778|3,16778|0,16778|1,17048|3,17048|2,17183|2,17318|2,17318|3,17318|0,17318|1) -
All jumps in this section should be replaced with single notes because that's what the "vocals" were represented with earlier, and there's no audible change in tone to facilitate such an increase
00:11:932 (11932|0,11932|1,12067|1,12202|1,12337|3,12472|1,12472|0,12607|0,12742|0,12877|3) -
These should be reworked. They should be single jump-minijacks like the previous ones, but moved up 1/12th beat. The jumps represent nothing in their current state!
00:18:127 (18127|1,18127|3,18127|2) -
This is the only time a hand is used to represent this single beat - either keep it and replace all the other ones, or make it a jump (please do the latter)