To begin with: This diff has a lot of issues with rhythm, vocal emphasis, and the fact that SV changes don't reflect the song. Calm parts have near no difference in sv, and contrast between kiai and verse is basically non-existent.jpg
Talking about the kiai, the rhythm is mostly fine, until i get to parts like 01:16:176 (5) -. Here you are trying to follow a background instrument. This doesn't have to be the only thing to focus on, so basically you could put a 1/2 slider somewhere 01:16:340 here, which emphasizes more, and also makes the kiai feel like a kiai.
feels like current kiai is already good and if i were to use sliders on parts like 01:16:176 (5,6) - wont be really clear what rhythm following which is confusin for new player