00:10:216 (1,2,3) - Not a best angle . Try too put (1) in right upper corner. After 00:08:398 (2) - i guess should be moving in the opposite direction
00:37:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - feels odd since you didn't use this back and fourth flow well, would put 7 like this
01:15:672 (1,1,1) - this part could be better if you copy previous 01:15:066 (1,1,1) - and verticaly revers (ctrl+J) it with increasing spacing
01:20:520 (1,1,1) - can give larger spacing to give contrast with 01:19:914 (1,1,1) - as you did at previous 01:15:066 (1,1,1,1,1,1) -