00:17:276 (7,8) - Could make these 1/1 circles instead since the section is still pretty calm in this section
00:56:507 (6,7,8) - The overmapped triple is really out of place here since the section is very calm, suggest doing this instead.
01:04:045 (2,3,4,5) - Think the grouping should be more like this since 3 is much less prominent than 4 or 5.
01:08:199 (1) - Having this as a 1/1 slider feels really weak since the song is building up, would make this a 1/2 slider so that you can add a circle onto 01:08:507 for the snare.
01:13:891 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This chain is really underwhelming to play as it is made up of mostly passive rhythm using 1/2 and 1/1 sliders while the vocals are very intense.
I suggest adding some additional rhythm density here to make it more straining like so:
01:13:891 (3) - 1/2 slider into circle
01:16:199 (3) -
01:29:276 (1,2) - 01:31:737 (1,2) - This is really underwhelming to play as the song is still very much intense in this section, so I recommend that you instead do a 1/2 slider into circle.