03:34:877 (3,4) - is this intentional? right now it's a pixel pattern, probably either nerf the distance if that was your intention or add a hyper here
03:56:426 (1,1) - Seeing as this will get DQ'd for the storyboard stuff you might want to look at the spinner transition while you're at it as I believe it could be a possible spintrap (I myself was caught out by it while playing)
04:13:509 (1) - mayb add decreasing volume lines here? it's a little off putting to have a spinnerend not muted when there's no sound at all