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00:22:165 I don't understand the reasoning for the timing here. after inspecting this is what it should look like

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Listening in 25% it sounds off in the 1/2 snap, compared to the ones above and below at least

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00:24:195 (24195|3,24316|3,24437|3,24559|3,24680|3,24801|3,24922|3,25043|3,25165|3,25286|3,25407|3,25528|3) - These anchors are completely unnecessary and the only thing they provide for the chart, is awkwardness and unplayability. There's no real reason on why they should be there. I would recommend getting rid of them completely.

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The same goes for the jumps at 00:46:559 - 00:56:740

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Anchors have been removed and just made into normal js/hs

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00:33:831 00:34:195 00:34:559 I suggest highlighting the kick+cymbal on these beats with a triple or a position change of the double (example)

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Fixed

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00:34:680 00:34:801 I suggest turning these doubles into single notes since the sound is much quieter here compared to the rest of the drum fill

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Agreed, fixed

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00:45:346 this double should be in 1/2 not 1/3

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Fixed

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00:46:286 you can hear a tom being hit here

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Good catch, fixed

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00:57:831 00:58:013 00:58:104 these toms should also be mapped as doubles if 00:57:922 is

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Fixed

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00:58:195 - 01:09:831
Check back on this part - try to make the notes match the tones in the song* more.

01:09:286 -
You missed kicks here.

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Fixed the kicks at 01:09:286. Unsure how I'd make the map match the tones of the song without overmapping

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Oop, sorry if I wasn't clear enough -
Try to match the notes in the map to the notes in the song, tonally.
If the note is higher, move the flow right, and visa versa for lower notes, for example.

(sent a video example through discord for reference :3c)

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Got you, fixed

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01:06:922 (66922|1) 01:07:104 (67104|1) anchor feels unnecessary

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03:02:929 same here

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Both fixed

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01:32:316 should have additional ln here for violin

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Unsure how I would add this?

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01:34:559 - 01:42:922

Any particular reason why you chose to shorten the LNs in this section compared to 01:20:013 and on?

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It's supposed to follow both the guitar and violin, the shorter LNs are for the guitar since each individual sound is pretty short, as opposed to the violin. Compared to 01:20:013 where the guitar and violin are perfectly in sync.

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Makes sense.

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01:52:013 - 01:57:831

Why is this part the exact same as 01:46:195 - 01:52:013. I assume you mapped the dump in there for the vocal, and the vocal clearly isn't present in the part mentioned, so why would it be the same density?

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Mistake on my part, remade the part to focus on the drums

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02:46:922 you can hear a snare being hit here

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Fixed

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03:12:123 snare should be mapped

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Fixed

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03:15:510 (195510|1,195510|0,195704|0,195704|2,195897|2,195897|1) -
Too harsh. Try something like this instead:

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I think I started the drum buildup too soon, fixed.

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03:18:365 this double is mapped to nothing there's no sound being played on this beat

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Does the start of the guitars between the two snares not count as a sound?

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03:44:736 - 03:56:833
This part makes no sense in coherence with the parts before or after. I'd suggest to try dumping it as well, cause considering the rest of the map, 1/2 release inverse doesn't fit very well.

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Remapped as dump, does fit the vibe, but unsure if it's unbalanced

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I'd say that It's pretty balanced up to 03:50:155 - maybe go and revisit the minijacks created by the handstreams. Otherwise, this is much better!

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Removed all the accidental 3 note minijacks, feel like the 2 note minijacks are just part of it being light handstream at that bpm, and it's not unreasonably hard imo.

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Deleted the original response, I tried a couple version and this fits much better

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04:46:116 04:46:389 suggest you highlight these snares with triples like 04:45:844

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Fixed

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04:48:026 (288026|1,288026|0) -

This section under-represents the kicks too much. The LNs are a nice touch, but the structuring in this part should be redone. I'd suggest adding some hands in on the kicks instead of the jumps you have now, to make the section denser and allow the kicks to stand out more.

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Represent the violins as jump graces now and made the kicks denser, fits better imo.

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04:59:662 just an idea for this section you can try to make the notes short lns during the vocal phrases and keep them as normal notes when there's only guitar

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I dont feel like short lns fit that well

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05:15:818 - 05:48:511
This part is really really good wow

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05:15:818 should make this a triple to more better represent the heavy sound on this beat

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Fixed

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