00:58:375 (1) - 02:05:875 (1) - I think you can remove ncs here because the vocal phrase starts 00:57:906 (2) - and the rest of your map is following vocals
01:05:875 (4,5,6,7) - 02:13:375 (4) - Nc the start of these patterns of 4 to be consistent with the rest of them eg. 00:43:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:50:875 (1,2,3,4) -
02:09:625 (3,4,5,1) - Overlap here is potentially confusing to read for newer players, maybe move 02:11:265 (5,1) - further to the left
02:56:500 (1,3) - 02:56:500 (1,3) - Switch ncs here to follow vocal phrasing more accurately and to be consistent with 01:57:906 (3,1,2,3,4) -