00:50:598 (268,269,270) - This triplet doesn't represent anything strong in particular. You should consider moving it to 00:50:773 (270) - instead and make it like d ddk in 00:50:598 (268,269,270,271) -
as there's 1/4 percussion sounds on 00:50:686 (269)(that's a little bit small though but if ignored i feel a bit weird), so I think those notes should remain a triplet...
01:13:447 (452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462) - This pattern doesn't fit well with the section aswell as being uncomfortable to play. You should try changing it to ddkdddkkddk
applied that, also changed 01:12:924 (449,450,451) 1/2 d k k pattern into k d k, in order to follow the melody accurately