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00:22:988 (22988|3,23045|0,23103|3,23103|2) - 这个地方感觉比00:22:413 (22413|3,22413|0,22471|2,22528|1,22528|3) - 这种的强度要大一点，感觉要换一个硬一点的排列
eg.

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00:22:988 (22988|3,23103|3,23218|3,23333|3,23448|3) - 这个五锚键很突兀

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Reopened by [GB]Cinelia

00:22:988 (22988|3,23103|3,23218|3,23333|3,23448|3) - 这三个键采的啥音

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00:24:310

00:24:310 (24310|2,24367|3,24425|2,24482|3,24540|2,24597|3) - 和
00:26:206 (26206|3,26206|2,26206|1,26321|0,26321|1,26379|2,26436|3,26436|0) -
应该有一致性

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00:25:402

00:25:402 (25402|3,25402|1,25459|2,25517|1,25517|0) - 三连鼓点和其他地方没有区分度，和前后也没有保持一致

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00:29:022 (29022|0,29080|1,29080|2,29137|3,29195|2,29195|1) - 后面也是，都看一下，保持一致

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00:26:149

00:26:149 (26149|0,26206|0,26206|1,26206|2) - What is this

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00:35:057

00:35:057 (35057|0,35057|2,35172|1,35172|3,35287|3,35287|2) - 这个地方为什么不像00:42:298 (42298|1,42413|1,42528|1) - 这种一样写三连

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音没对上

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00:42:643

00:42:643 (42643|2,42758|2,42873|2) - 我觉得这个三连不合理，第一个音和后面两个感觉不一样，后面还有几个这样的地方

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00:42:816

00:42:816 (42816|1) - 虚空踩音

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00:43:735 (43735|2) - 同上，。00:43:850 - 这里有音又没踩

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00:43:563

00:43:563 (43563|1,43735|1,43850|1,43984|1,44137|1,44252|1,44367|1,44482|1) - 这轨压力太大了
00:43:850 (43850|1) - 这个note根据前面那个小节来看出于一致性应该删去
00:44:252 (44252|1,44367|1,44482|1) - 这个可以挪到一轨
00:44:597 - 这里把右手的拍减少一点跟前面三连的感觉衔接一下

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01:00:344

01:00:344 (60344|1,60344|0,60402|2,60402|3,60459|1,60459|0,60517|2,60517|3,60574|1,60574|0,60632|3,60632|2) - 这里一定要写短面吗?w? 一样采的鼓
00:59:770 (59770|3,59770|1,59827|2,59885|1,59885|0,59942|2,59942|3,59999|1,59999|0,60057|3,60114|0,60114|2,60172|1) -
00:56:551 (56551|1,56551|3,56609|2,56666|1,56666|0,56724|3,56724|2,56781|1,56781|0,56839|3,56896|0,56896|2,56954|1) -
都写的米，后面有旋律的地方
01:13:620 (73620|1,73678|2,73735|3,73793|0,73850|1,73908|3,73908|2,73965|0,74022|3,74080|2,74137|1,74195|0,74252|3,74252|2,74310|1,74367|0,74425|3,74482|2,74482|1,74540|0,74597|3,74655|2,74712|1,74712|0,74770|3,74827|2,74885|1,74942|3,74942|0,74999|2,75057|1,75114|0,75172|3,75172|2,75229|1,75287|0,75344|3) -
写短面我都没意见

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01:28:505

01:28:505 - 我觉得这里可以把电子音写纵，然后ln长度再有点变化

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01:37:011

01:37:011 (97011|0,97068|1,97126|2,97183|3,97241|0,97298|1,97356|2,97413|3) - 这个小节强度弱了，buff，注意保持前面锚键的规律，1轨应该有一个四连锚

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确实应该保持前面的四连锚，但是这边鼓点double了，为什么要在第二拍放双押，可以换成2121

6 months agoLast edited by [GB]Cinelia 6 months ago.

01:37:011

01:37:011 (97011|0,97068|1,97126|2,97183|3,97241|0,97298|1,97356|2,97413|3) -
01:47:471 (107471|0,107586|0,107701|0,107816|0) -
注意锚键位置

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锚键位置有什么问题

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01:37:011 (97011|0,97068|1,97126|2,97126|0,97183|3,97241|0,97298|1,97356|2,97356|0,97413|3) -
这里鼓点是连续的，为什么要在第二拍放双押

6 months agoLast edited by [GB]Cinelia 6 months ago.

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