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00:07:720 - Esto debería ser un doble, tiene el mismo sonido de 00:07:891 (7891|0,7891|2,8062|3,8062|2) -

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mmm no estoy de acuerdo con este problema. Siento que queda mejor en triple que doble en 00:07:720 , es mas potente a comparacion que las dobles de 00:07:891 (7891|2,7891|0,8062|2,8062|3) - ya que represento esas dobles por el tom que es menos potente que el snare.

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00:11:630
better change jumptrill to jumpstream if there is no same length jumptrill latter, a bit hard for KPS spike

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changed

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00:33:616 (33616|2,33744|2) - maybe remove 1/2 jack here, it implies it's following same/similar sound to 00:31:437 (31437|1,31565|1) - but it isn't

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ok removed

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00:36:693 - The interruption of the melody is a bit abrupt, you can add a little transition

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ok

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There are several consistency issues regarding LN between 00:38:744-00:47:462:

00:43:360 00:44:129 00:45:411 00:45:667 00:46:180

I'm not sure if this was intentional or an oversight,but if you want to create a gradient feeling, at least arrange it more regularly

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fixed

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Yo creo que deberías de volver a ver esta sugerencia. También podrías agregar una LN en 00:47:719 por la misma razón.

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pienso que no deberia ir una ln en 00:47:719 - ya que sonidos similares lo he estado representando como jack. por ejemplo como en

00:39:513 (39513|1,39642|1) -
00:43:616 (43616|0,43744|0) -
00:46:437 (46437|1,46565|1) -

etc
a no ser que la nota simple de 00:47:847 (47847|2) - la convierta en ln

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perdón si me demore mucho acabó de revisar otra vez, el chart esta increíble, no hay muchas cosas que remarcar kjnds

00:55:154 - creo que acá igual falta una nota por la instrumental (?

mucha suerte con el ranking papu

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muchas gracias bro

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01:00:026 (60026|3,60026|1,60026|0,60539|3,60603|1,60667|2,60731|3,60795|1) - talvez me equivoque, pero creo que esto esta un poco más dificil que la top dificuly al mantener esa Lns larga, deberias acortarla o hacer lo mismo en la top dificulty

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cambiado

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01:19:771 (79771|0,79899|1,80028|2,80156|0,80284|1,80412|2,80540|3,80669|1,80797|2,80925|0,81053|1,81181|2) - esto creo que deberias reorganizarlo un poco para que no quede todo en una sola direccion, en mi opinion queda raro.

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01:23:883 i know it fits the music, but only using one flow is a bit repeated
if you change flow every bar then the handfeel can be better
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01:31:237 (91237|1,91301|0) - i suggest flipping these to avert from the [21] roll movement in 01:30:660 (90660|1,90724|0,90852|1,90916|0,91044|1,91108|0) to make it more engaging to play

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Done

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01:33:929 (93929|1) - this long note is 1/4 too late cuz the guitar starts at the blue line before so i suggest moving it to there

feel like something like this should work

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moved

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Cuál es exactamente el sentido de esos LN's 01:36:237 (96237|0,96749|3,97262|0) - ? Tranquilamente 01:37:967 (97967|3,98160|0) - puede ser la melodía principal pero los anteriores no tienen mucho sentido. Podrías eliminarlo tranquilamente.

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opino que es mejor eliminar solamente la ln 01:36:749 (96749|3) - y dejarlo como single

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01:37:967 (97967|3) - this one is 1/4 too late as well since the synth starts at the blue line before

could do something like this

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01:40:083 better keep using 1/3 for melody in this bar, i dont think it's too long after adding it

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oka done

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01:42:390 podrías agregar una nota

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agregada

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En Yo creo que si vas a agregar 01:47:519 (107519|3) - podrías agregar una LN como en la top diff, reemplazando la nota simple.

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listo

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01:52:647 estaria bien que agregaras ln o como rice algo como hizo hachyko en su diff, ya que la ln que lo que tienes ahora se siente un poco vacio con lo que tienes en la top diff

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01:52:647 sorry but it can look better like
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the original one looks a bit awkward

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01:54:057 (114057|1) - this long note would fit better at 01:54:185
it's a similar sound to 01:54:185 so it should probably follow that

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mmm i understand your suggestion but i don't really agree with this

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01:59:955 (119955|2) - i think there should be a long note here for the synth

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02:05:895 (125895|1,125980|1) - i think this anchor is kind of brutal especially in this speed and level, i suggest moving 02:05:980 (125980|1) to the column 4 instead for more comfortability

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moved

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02:15:724 (135724|3) - creo que es una ghost note

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arreglado

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02:18:416 (138416|1) - creo que es mejor hacerla doble

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añadido

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