Reaper

00:07:301 (1,2) - I think you intended to follow vocal in this section, but the head of 2 only falls on a weak vocal sound, while the more obvious vocal at 00:07:967 is ignored. Maybe something like this https://kanatama.s-ul.eu/FDYMdfTG (or use 1/2 sliders if you don't want 1/4 reverse) would follow the vocals here better and also more in line with the low intensity of the beginning.

00:11:801 - considering you put piano here, you ignore piano on 00:11:134 - and 00:12:467 - which have same amount of impact. the rhythm switch looks forced

i strongly suggest to map the piano and tweak the vocal around 00:10:301 (2,3,4) - or just alternatively follow the vocal fully like this

00:17:134 (5) - since you cover piano here, might as well tweak 00:16:134 (3,4) - to something like

00:43:801 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - - I think this part doesn't do a good job at representing either vocals or drums. The vocals here have 4 groups of triples and are represented in 3 different ways (active at 13, 23, or 12); I mean there is melody changes but I doubt it deserves such variation in active rhythm. For drums, 00:43:801 is followed by a circle, 00:45:134 is covered by a slider anchor, while 00:44:467 is ignored. I'd prefer make the rhythm choice here more simple and intuitive, maybe smth like this https://kanatama.s-ul.eu/bvDuXxnu (no active rhythm on drums, and consistent active rhythm for vocals). If you prefer some variation in vocal rhythm, I suggest only vary it once e.g. https://kanatama.s-ul.eu/qmTRPpvj

00:45:967 (5,6,7) - since there's clap at 00:46:467 - you can tweak 00:45:967 (5,6,7) - to without sacrificing the vocal

00:56:634 (5,6) - clap at 00:57:134 - so tweak like to capture it

01:58:301 (4) - looks better if all circles to capture the clap impact. and/or to capture the long vocal too

02:38:467 (6) - there's start of vocal on end slider so it's a bit hard to follow for newer when there's consecutives 1/4 chain around it, so it's better if u only use a circle and give 1/2 gap instead

02:47:134 (1,2) - this kind of overlap (partially overlap sliderbody and opposite direction) is a bit too much in Normal imo. smth like this https://kanatama.s-ul.eu/aq7dUs9a would be more intuitive to Normal players

03:06:301 (2) - considering #4270202, could do to cover the snare

03:08:467 - pretty minor, decrease vol to around 30% since it's only to gib feedback on that pitch change on mid-vocal

using whistle also give a nice touch to accentuate the end of the song.