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00:38:467 (1,2,3,1) - higher pitch are passive and lower pitch are active which are pretty wonky, just do rhythm like 01:31:801 (6,7,8,1) - 02:25:134 (1,2,3,1) - which have better emphasis

12 months ago

yea sure

12 months ago

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00:46:134

00:46:134 (5,6) - try to capture the clap at 00:46:467 - ?

12 months ago

01:39:467 (5,6) -

12 months agoLast edited by Kuro Fuyusaki 12 months ago.

it's funny that you do what i actually imagined like in 02:32:801 (5,6,7,8) - so, yea, do something similar to that, lul

12 months ago

yep did the first suggestion cos lower intensity

12 months ago

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00:49:134

00:49:134 (5,6) - consider making rhythm similar to 00:38:467 (1,2,3) - or 01:42:467 (5,6,7) - since it's similarly intense transition

12 months agoLast edited by Kuro Fuyusaki 12 months ago.

i think i'll keep considering first chorus is less intense and drums are not as loud as the other 2 choruses

12 months ago

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00:56:801

00:56:801 (5,6) - similar case with #4270259 but try this instead

12 months ago

noice

12 months ago

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01:05:467

01:05:467 (6) - not sure why u added this in hard hard diff while your other diffs end at 01:05:134 - clap and keep the melody empty. consider deleted it?

12 months ago

it's also to consider that you currently ignored melody at 01:05:801 - so it's better to ignore every melody considering that's what you primarily do in every other diffs.

12 months ago

yea fair enough

12 months ago

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02:45:634

02:45:634 (2) - rhythm usage there doesn't represent well any of the music that you intended to follow. head slider follow vocal, reverse follow low-melody and slidertail follow tom drum, additionally you ignored prominent melody in 02:45:801 - 02:46:467 - so this makes your rhythm choice unclear.

following the same pattern logic as 02:44:467 (1) - are preferable if you intend on following the calm intensity + emphasis that long vocal instead

or alternatively if you want to follow melody, you can do something like or a bit simplification like to make contrast with the dense part of the chorus

11 months agoLast edited by Kuro Fuyusaki 11 months ago.

this sounds better yea. thx!

61 days ago