00:46:871 (5) - should NC
fixed
01:07:109 (3,4) - could change to reverse, would keep things simple here because finger control over here seems a bit crazy for a build-up
changed to stack 1/4s here to lower difficulty
01:22:823 (4,5) - space more otherwise it could be confused for 1/4
01:25:125 (1,2) - ok this comes afterwards maybe you should differentiate them both somehow, replacing with 1/4 reverse works here
reversed 01:22:823 (4) - to another direction
01:38:458 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - very nice
01:41:633 (1) - spacing of this seems a tad large out of nowhere, would bring them a bit closer together to better fit in the spacing of this section
ok