02:02:211 (4) - make this a 1/2 slider which ends on 02:02:361 to emphasize the vocal
02:05:661 (2) - This repeat slider kinda destroys the momentum in this kiai . you should make this more active. I suggest you make the rhythm like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/641897917657120771/1218550016201723944/image.png?ex=66081223&is=65f59d23&hm=8da459c6456cdd33fdd63b27bf899aaa3acb372fca187e71c6d6a910e9351ce7& ( My line starts at 02:05:661 )
02:06:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - you abuse jumps way too much on here which does not follow anything. You should continue to follow the vocals like this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/641897917657120771/1218551276468568194/screenshot026.jpg?ex=6608134f&is=65f59e4f&hm=728d10012e0996a3fa36871e9eed1509029732baf6676010f56561eabdf78f92&