00:13:874 (13874|0,14061|3) - maybe same as 00:14:436 (14436|2,14624|2,15186|1,15374|1) - ? no difference I think
00:25:124 (25124|1) - and 00:25:874 (25874|3) - it is better to extend this slider 1/1, compared to this one 00:25:499 (25499|2) -
I like but, 00:25:874 (25874|3) - It is better that the LN be in 1/2, since the vowel ends there
00:32:249 (32249|2,32249|3,32624|3,32811|2,32811|3,32999|2,33186|3,33374|2,33374|3) - too heavy on the right side from earlier, maybe try avoid jack 00:32:999 (32999|2) -
01:09:374 (69374|2,69936|2) - these two LNs for "su" may be shortened to 1/2? 1/1 is much more than it real length