00:00:760 (1,1) - 1/2 gap doesn't seem like enough time for hard players to adjust to the slider.
00:40:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - will not blame u for rhythm choice, but it plays kinda hard for players on this lvl. try to finish 00:41:442 (4) - here 00:41:670 - instead
00:45:988 (3) - would put nc here to emphasize strong kick, like u did here 00:42:351 (1) -
00:50:192 (3,4) - the (4) slider shape would confuse newer players with the current slider path a long with the overlap with (3).
The rule states
01:05:998 (1,2,1,2,3) - 03:00:543 (1,2,1,2,3) -
I think it'd be better if you make these chains a bit more dense to better emphasize the melody reset, not to mention the lack of intensity generated by those gaps
01:52:579 (1) - would delete nc here for making this vocal part one whole, like here 01:59:851 (6) -