00:09:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - theres no sound on 3 and theres a sound on the blue tick between 4 and 5 that isnt mapped, personally i would just move 3 between 4 and 5 and that fixes both problems
so movement wise 00:14:908 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:25:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are different one is wide and the other is sharp consider making it consistent ?
00:23:089 (6) - would change visuals to look more like this https://i.imgur.com/js2bxQp.png
00:41:158 (1,1,1) - fix spacing pls so 00:41:499 (1,1) - touch but 00:41:158 (1,1) - doesnt (like how 00:40:135 (1,1) - does it)
00:42:479 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stacking these makes it really hard to read so maybe like change spacing on the gaps like this ?
also 00:43:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - revisit how these are snapped it doesnt sound right idk
00:42:479 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nah, i think it's fine
00:43:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'm only unsure about 2, others sound fine imo
00:43:075 (1,2,3,4,5) - the way that these are spaced like they have the same time apart but 1 is further from the rest makes it a little harder to read consider fixing that
00:48:999 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this whole section is kinda repetitive and monotonous so unless thats what you intended id say change it cuz its a lil boring
and because of 01:20:021 (1) - being too big, 01:20:362 (1) - this sucks to play because of the similarity of emphasis
01:26:157 (1,1) - consider increasing spacing here so its consistent with 01:20:703 (1,1) -
01:56:498 (5,6) - im not sure why there is cross-screen spacing here i would move 01:55:816 (3,4,5) - up so the drum on 3 is emphasized with spacing and 01:56:839 (6) - still has some (like https://i.imgur.com/VfXFmg1.png)
i thought that it would be funny to represent "i could touch you from over here" by going to other half of playfield. you probably missed the concept that verses are mapped in only top/bottom part of the screen and when the chorus comes, i make the movement go to the other half (like being able to reach something you couldn't before)
02:43:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - this is just 02:38:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - vertically flipped but the song changed a bit so i dont think this is the best way
02:48:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - you ignored the vocal sounds for repeating the same pattern as before and i think if u changed this to reflect the vocal cuts itd be better to play
02:54:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - i feel like this section was a little undermapped and repetitive and if you would remap it you could do much better here
03:43:544 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 04:24:623 (1) - this is around 41 seconds of the map and you mapped it in one of the most boring ways possible ignoring all vocals ignoring everything the song is doing and that really really sucks
04:38:089 (1,2,3) - fix spacing here too so its consistent with spacing between 04:38:771 (3,4) -
04:54:112 (4) - i wouldnt have this be the same slider as 04:53:089 (1,2) - its a different sound id change it tbh
same with 05:05:021 (4) -
05:06:725 (1,2) - id fix spacing so its the same for both angles ( https://i.imgur.com/uvRQoi8.png )