i think you could add some more 1/4 to the other choruses as well (00:55:078 & 01:22:833) like you do in the last chorus with 02:20:228 (5,6,1) - 02:23:085 (4,5,6) - for example
currently the choruses feel kinda weak rhythm density-wise because the verses have a lot more 1/4 in them