<a class="link link--white link--no-underline" href="https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/2083111">Ring of Fortune (Cut Ver.)

00:20:539 (20539|1,20634|2,20729|3,20824|0,20919|1) - You've described all the drum-roll here as a single.

Of course, 00:20:729 (20729|3) - I understand that it is because of this expression, but 00:20:539 (20539|1,20634|2,20729|3,20824|0,20919|1) - in one direction. I don't think it needs to be used.

So 00:20:824 (20824|0,20919|1) - if you Ctrl+G here, 00:21:108 (21108|0) - not only will this place be highlighted, but you won't feel anything strange when playing.

16 months ago

01:44:368 (104368|0,104463|1) - same here

16 months ago

00:20:349 - changed

01:44:368 (104368|0,104463|1) - but ill keep this pattern。 becuz it isnt same with 00:20:349 - . rather, it corresponds to 00:23:767.

16 months ago

Marked as resolved by cai_ji_ccc

00:24:051

00:24:051 (24051|2) - Is there a reason you chose this place?

Personally, I can't hear any sound, 00:23:197 (23197|3,23292|2,23387|1,23482|0,23577|3,23577|2,23767|0,23862|1,23957|3,24051|2,24146|3,24146|1,24146|0) - Although it has a similar structure, the flow of the music you hear is different, so it feels strange when playing.

Rather 00:23:957 (23957|3) - this Tom sounds more fluent, and instead of 00:24:051 (24051|2) - this expression 00:23:957 (23957|3) - double here: I think it's good to emphasize this.

16 months agoLast edited by Buschan 16 months ago.

changed XD

16 months ago

Marked as resolved by cai_ji_ccc

01:04:969

01:04:969 (64969|1,65064|2,65159|1) - vs 01:05:349 (65349|2,65444|1,65539|2) -

I think you used too much trill. Personally, since the atmosphere and flow are different, using similar patterns lacks impact.

Therefore, it would be a good idea to take advantage of the empty column 1 and move this snare to column 1 : 01:05:444 (65444|1)

16 months ago

nice idea. changed now

16 months ago

Marked as resolved by cai_ji_ccc

01:08:387

01:08:387 (68387|2,68387|3,68577|0,68577|1,68767|3,68957|0,68957|1,69146|2,69146|3,69336|0,69336|1,69526|3,69526|2) - It's a very simple jump format, and the layout doesn't seem to be suitable for the hard difficulty level.

Even when compared to Insane, it is too easy to be considered a lower difficulty level compared to LN Jack. And since it is the part right before the chorus, it needs to be strong. Choruses are really essential for build-up as they usually have the same density.

13 months agoLast edited by Buschan 13 months ago.

13 months ago

Marked as resolved by cai_ji_ccc

01:29:083