01:08:039 - I feel like it's a bit odd the drum here is ignored since it's kind of loud compared to the other drums in this part, I think u could add a note here and remove the one on 01:07:945 (67945|1)
your suggestion definitely makes sense, but id like a more balanced play with 01:07:681 (67681|1,67769|2,67857|0,67945|1) -> 01:08:129 (68129|2,68220|1,68311|3,68402|2) - 4 drums