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This beatmap was ranked on 14 July 2024!
nominated by SN707, KaedeharaKazuha, and Okoayu
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00:30:558 (4,6) - maybe separate those so they look nicer

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okk!

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Marked as resolved by Sayama Kaede

00:38:112 - maybe add a slidermute here? I feel like adding one here specifically would fit with the song

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that's true

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00:39:897 (4,5,1) - flow is a bit bruh

idrk what kind of aesthetics you're going for here so can't help provide suggestion lol. maybe leverage the circular flow from 00:39:897 (4,5) - more?

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Keep because currently I like the this way flow for playabillty and visual

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sorry i fucked up the image lol original post is supposed to have image.
blue is current, green is proposed.
current flow is kinda wobbly linear kinda thing just feels kinda iffy to play to me maybe just me tho

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Reopened by CrystilonZ

I don't think it's particularly strange given the flow of 4 and 5
might feel that way if I only look at 5...

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00:48:158 (1,2) - this rhythm is a bit sus because other instances there are always some kind of strong sound on 00:48:376 (2) - . I think some rhythm like 01:59:461 (1,2,3) - is more fitting?

01:53:809 (3,4) - same here

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I didn't feel that the rhythms were particularly strange

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00:49:688 (4,5) - idk these feel excessive 02:00:991 (4,5) - at least are a bit more chill, but i think both should just not be 1/8 or at least hitsound them or something

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At first I used two circles but I wanted to express the intensity of the vocals.
I would like to keep it if possible.
00:49:797 (5) - added whistle

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i think it hsould chill out

like maybe

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Reopened by Okoayu

ok~

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00:56:645 (5,6,1,2,3) - , 01:03:384 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -

would appreciate if you'd make these rhythms follow the vocals just like you did in the 2nd chorus.

It would make it way more intuitive to play.

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ok!

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01:29:353 (3) - probably need hitsound for this. maybe a kick like 00:33:702 (3) -

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agree

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ya!

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01:46:425 - i think having something that expands more could be cooler here, right now the 1/3 pattern is kinda baby

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buffed

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01:48:762 (5) - ??? why 1/8

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wao

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01:52:069 (3,4,5,6) - this doesn't really fit imo. I feel like you're going for vocals here but 01:52:069 (3,4) - is obviously weaker than 01:52:287 (5,6) - . Swap spacing around?

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On the contrary, I think that this spacing just fitting :o

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02:08:374 (2,3,4) - very weird imo because 02:08:374 (2,3) - these are two spaced circle on weaker vocals but when theres a sharp increase on 'gomen' it's a click and hold reverse slider 02:08:591 (4) -

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When playing this section, it's important to move the aim slightly upward when clicking the reverse slider at 02:08:591 (4), and then aim at the next circle at 02:08:917 (5). This way, by doing this, I believe the strength of the vocals is fully expressed.

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02:16:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since the drums/song is doing something notably different from 02:09:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , I feel like some more variation in patterning and/or rhythm here would be cool

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ok!

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