00:54:049 (1,2,3,4) - this feels quite overwhelming because of the huge gap in between 00:54:377 (2,3) - these, as well as you never do such spacing in the progression (i.e. 01:30:787 (1,2,3,4) - 02:49:544 (1,2,3,4) - ) so i'd just say u could probably nerf it a little
02:07:543 (1) - could turn this into a 1/1 and a circle instead to follow vocals better, rn this feels too simplified compared to the rest of this section imo
02:15:422 (1) - tbh switching this into circles only is better since it literally was how you highlighted the melody pitch changes in this section and now using slider reverses feel really underwhelming imo
02:34:453 (4) - 02:38:059 (3) - imo these 3/4 sliders felt unnecessary, would feel better to just consistently follow the riff with 1/2 sliders
02:40:359 (1) - thoughts on shortening this to a 1/1 instead? i get the idea of having a hold towards that rhythm but its kinda awkward to fit in imo
02:40:852 (2) - and u can stack this under the sliderend so 02:41:016 (3) - this can get highlighted
02:50:199 (4,5,1) - this can be way more spaced, especially when it's the last chorus it should have at least bare minimum of what you had in places like 00:54:706 (4,5,1) - 01:31:443 (4,5,1) - these