00:17:518 (4,1) - For visual purposes this overlap on top of the slider looks visually off so you might want to change that
00:18:852 (6,7,1) - This overlap is also kinda visually hard to see, the way the slider overlaps the circle looks weird to the player and should be considered to change
00:19:417 (2) has an awkward overlap with the sliders at 00:20:145 (1,2) - visually hard to follow may consider changing
00:24:461 (3,4) - 00:30:279 (7,8) not having these as long sliders when everything else is feels off
00:30:054 (6) - might wanna make a big jump here like you did on 00:31:508 (4) - and 00:25:690 (4) - , a ctrl+g should be fine imo
00:34:417 (6) - if you mean this then highlighthing it with kiai wouldn't really be consistant with the rest of the section beforehand
while yes what you choose to highlight with kiai is subjective, the way the kiai is currently set is inconsistant with the intensity consider that the whole section beforehand is a repetition of notes that are the same as part you've chosen to highlight, if say 00:23:417 to 00:35:054 was all kiai the highlight would be consistant
00:45:007 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - i think you underestimate how difficult this is to play, maybe nerf this
00:45:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - spacing is huge and I dont think the music really supports it.
00:46:281 (1) - having this be a slider instead of circles is kinda weird considering there isnt a change warrenting a slider here.
01:21:963 (5,6) - the change in stream spacing is cool but I don't think this part of the song calls for it
01:34:281 (5) - theres no reason that you should ignore the piano considering its the main instrument here
01:34:554 (6) - This important note is mapped. Not mapping every sound is fine and the sliderend is on the less important sound
01:35:281 (1,2,3,4) - this is so unreadable, plase at least move 01:35:281 (1,2,3) - a bit so its not perfectly overlapping with the tail/red anchor of 01:35:554 (4) -
01:48:508 (1,2,3,4) - i feel like you should ctrl+g 01:48:690 (3,4) - , since the current pattern breaks the pseudo-circular flow created by 01:48:235 (2,3,4,1) -, which makes the pattern feels unnecessarily hard even for the map's difficulty
01:51:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is nice but its pretty hard to read, which usually wouldn't be too big of a deal with a repeating pattern, however, the change in flow at 01:51:736 (1,2,3,4) - is very hard to read considering it overlaps with the rest of the pattern. I understand the musical reason behind the change in flow, however, I dont think it is justified enough given the unreadableness of the pattern. it could work if you made it a bit more readable or something
01:53:554 (1) - 01:56:372 (4) - i think something more than just a cutstream would be appreciated because the rest of the map doesnt have anything like this. the last 4 is a nice change but it doesnt make sense to have it like that if the rest of it is just lines.
01:56:508 (1) - this slider has this really odd curve here
removing the grey anchor under this one
make it looks cleaner imo