Duplicity Shade

00:03:546 (3546|0) - There is no point extending this ln further, stay consistent with 00:01:203 - where there isnt any arbitrary excess ln hold.

Leaving the release at 00:03:703 - is good enough

00:05:890 (5890|2) - this isnt a vocal, and though you may have intended to emphasize this piano note. It really isnt a strong reason to make an inconsistency as the piano does not have anything extraordinary like an increased volume. Recommend turning it to rice

00:06:203 (6203|1,6203|0) - Minor thing but could a 1/16 grace work? This chord here sounds more gracey compared to the others.

00:10:265 (10265|0) - no vocal. Turn to rice (#3884820)

00:13:546 (13546|0) - why inconsistent with the vocal emphasis. this should be an ln

00:13:703 (13703|1,13703|0,13703|3) - No bell here, consider turning this into dooooble instead

00:16:515 (16515|2) - Would recommend moving this to col 1 (1|2|3|4) to avoid this 00:16:203 (16203|2,16515|2) - it feels more heavy in the middle without much reason.

00:17:765 (17765|3,17921|0,18234|2) - Why are the lns detached here? The releases should be connected like you did with all the previous parts.

00:28:703 - could be turned into a triple due to bell

00:31:203 to 00:40:010 - This entire thing switches from rice to ln even though there is no apparent change in the song. It feels like this is there for the sake of it and nothing else. Would suggest revamping this entire part, and focus more on the background synths 00:35:056 - 00:35:606 -

The rest of it could just be rice, with the exception of 00:39:047 - as the instrument switches here.

There should be more LN build-ups than 00:43:863 (43863|3,43863|2,44414|1,44414|0) - to prepare 00:46:684 (46684|3,46753|2,46753|1,46822|0,46891|3,46891|2,46959|1,47028|2,47028|0,47097|3,47166|1,47166|2,47235|0,47303|2,47303|3,47372|1,47441|2,47441|0,47510|3,47579|0,47579|1,47647|2) -. Either the LN stream at 00:46:684 - should be removed since it's totally out of place or there should be more LNs expressed the same sounds.

00:47:716 - I find the dump here to be extremely mismatching to the scream in the song.

Would suggest removing these two 00:47:762 (47762|1,47808|2) - and when the vocal cuts back in at 00:47:854 - start using 1/4, increase to 1/6 when the vocal becomes stronger, and then use strong emphasis on the drums at 00:48:267 - to provide some contrast.

Something like this:

00:48:267 the drums here being completely ignored doesnt sit right with me considering the drums here are way louder than the voice

i'd recommend doing something like this

you could also play around with the pattern itself if you feel like doing so

00:48:680 (48680|3) - Nothing here warrants an ln. Rice

01:04:208 (64208|3,64273|0,64338|3,64403|0,64469|3) -

The lns provide no value throughout the entire buildup and the 1/8 combined with these lns feel more awkward to hit. Rice?

The distance of release at 01:05:338 (65338|2) - and the next LN at 01:05:425 (65425|3) - would be considered as a difficulty spike. 01:05:338 (65338|2,65382|1) - these two LNs should be shortened their length to avoid spike issue.

01:05:338 (65338|3,65360|2,65382|1,65425|3,65469|0) - This is not right. This should just be simplified to 1/6, there isnt any fancy grace in between or anything related to that.

From 01:22:208 - to the end of this song, I doubt using 1/4 long notes for every synthesizer sound was a good idea, since eventually you had to spam the jumptrill, which lacked the diversity of patterns' structures, for instance, 01:31:860 (91860|2,91860|3,91925|0,91925|1,91990|3,91990|2,92056|1,92056|0,92121|2,92121|3,92186|1,92186|0,92251|3,92251|2,92316|0,92316|1) - jumptrill like this have made the contrast of expression between normal notes and 1/4 LNs became nothing

Reduce 1/4 LNs to normal notes under common sense to keep the contrast between 1/4 LN and normal notes since currently the purpose of expressing sounds in 1/4LNs had no difference from normal notes.

01:43:306 - There is no 1/4 here yet at the same time this is a continuous 1/4 stream. Similar issue to #3884859

seems there was no reason about 02:14:434 (134434|0,134467|1,134500|2,134533|3,134565|0,134598|1,134631|2,134664|3) - and the LN releases from 02:14:369 - had to be difficult due to normal notes in the middle. Try avoid applying unnecessary ghost normal notes to make a reasonable contrast between different sounds. Such ghost notes have eventually made useful normal notes expressing actual sounds like 02:16:694 (136694|2,136727|1,136760|0,136825|1,136858|2) - became nothing.

02:21:442 - If I were to be honest, this part is extremely overdone, the music is not even that loud, yet this is such a dense jack section already. I would recommend lowering the density and using this kind of density for the later similar drop 02:41:338 - where it becomes stronger rather than using lns as a substitude

From 02:40:095 - to 03:01:235 - , similar to #3882654, I think those patterns lack reasons to have additional 1/4 LNs, as they didn't really bring the difference in playing but a sloppy visual difference in notes only.

03:31:079 - Why is this full inverse and 03:21:131 - has breaks in between when both areas sound exactly the same. There is no reason to warrant such a huge change in patterning.

04:18:372 (258372|1,258411|2) - these sounds dont actually exist, you should delete those and add a note on col 2 at 04:18:333 so it becomes a simple double

04:25:483 (265483|1,265483|0) - why are these softer drum sounds being represented with these doubles when right before that 04:24:240 (264240|1,264240|0) - this exact same pattern was used to represent a much more distinct and powerful drum sound

this is an issue i see yet again throughout the entirety of that section, pls look over it again and try to stick to a structure of

softer sound = one note / powerful sound = 2 notes / even louder sound = 3 notes

or something along those lines

05:25:403 - make the green line have no kiai and make the red line have kiai

06:17:642 (377642|1,377707|2,377707|3,377772|0,377837|1,377902|2,377902|3,377968|0,378033|1,378098|3,378163|1,378163|2,378163|0,378229|3,378294|1) - not really difficult as they look, but it doesn't hide the fact that the extentions of LN's length there have inflated SR lol. Reduce their length under common sense so it could somehow still match the consistency with patterns at 06:16:272 (376272|0,376305|1,376337|2,376370|3) - .