01:20:535 (1), 01:22:622 (1) - does not have a hitsound for the hit, as well as continuing through the section such as 01:24:709 (1) & 01:26:796 (1) where the guitar should be emphasized
01:45:230 (1) - more complex than 1/6; i recommend making it a reverse slider or a sliding slider
02:00:057 (1,2), 02:02:144 (1,2) - same for these; is not 1/4
02:03:839 (1) - it would make more sense to drag this out to the blue tick to remain consistent and to add more emphasis on after pickup
02:12:970 (1,2,3,4) - uncomfortable linear angle; maybe a pattern related to https://imgur.com/a/PcWmVjR would fit better here as well as being more visually appealing
02:14:274 (1) - this slider seems unsapped, just double check this
02:14:535 (2) - unsnapped slider tail
02:17:926 (3,4,1,2) you use 4 sliders but for the rest of the section you use 3 sliders such as 02:22:231 (5,1,2,3) for the same sound, changing the first section from 4 to 3 sliders would make this section fit better
03:04:361 (4) - a slower & longer slider or spinner fits better due to the sound being dragged out much longer than placed here