I Can Take Off My Panties!Explicit

00:12:567 - would add a note here as a 4.5(?)/1 break here is very unnatural and seems out of place. this also would be mapping the melody which is what is prioritized

same with 02:30:971 as well as 03:34:283

00:18:641 - This could use a note as it feels a bit out of place, mapping this gives a 3.5(?)/1 break which is acceptable + would be consistent with 00:30:420

00:36:125 - i mean a note here could be added for the buildup and the vocal, no note here kind of goes against the song i feel

same with 01:39:438 as well

00:42:567 (1) - feel like this should be colored a don to add some contrast for 00:41:095 (8,9); though would make 00:43:303 (2) - a kat though if you do this

same with 01:45:880 (1,2) as well as 02:41:093 (7)

00:50:665 - feels a bit weird to not emphasize this cymbal as it's something done before + would patch some spread issues

similarly, 00:51:770 & 00:52:506 could have notes for spread progression and vocal mapping

same thing applies to 01:53:978, 01:55:082, 01:55:818, 02:45:511, 02:46:615, 02:47:351

01:04:285 - add a note? would be consistent with how you chose to map the vocals and makes sense rhythmically

same applies to 01:16:064 as well as the 2nd & 3rd kiai

Checking how you used finish, I think you can do it here 01:14:775 - too.

Same for 02:18:087 - 03:09:620 -

01:14:959 (8) - i think you accidentally moved this to the white line as its inconsistent with how 01:02:996 is mapped

same with the 2nd & 3rd kiais as well

01:17:536 (2) - feels a bit weird to be a finisher since the only thing here is a slightly stronger melody, something i don't believe would make sense as a finisher

same with 01:19:377 (3,4,5) as well as 03:12:381 (2,3,4,5)

02:02:075 (1,2,3) - would probably change the coloring as it's the same as 01:59:866 (8,9,10) yet doesn't share the same vocals, making repeating the coloring weird. would recommend dkd or dkk for coloring

same with 02:13:854 (1,2,3)

02:19:744 (1) - think it would be better to remove the spinner instead as you are being inconsistent with 01:16:432 (1) for ending the kiai

02:20:480 --> 02:25:633 - would make sense to have the rhythm from the intro (00:01:340 --> 00:07:230) as this part of the song is similar to that, so it becomes consistent

02:31:891 - could maybe remove for no vocal?

02:48:455 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i feel like repeating the coloring from the first kiai is a bit meh as you could have done other coloring like kkd or dkd to differentiate it from the other kiais

same with 03:00:234 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) as well

03:24:160 (3,5,8) - would delete these notes to maintain consistency with the intro and how its mapped

03:35:387 - In the end, I think you can add a K here to end it strongly. You should be okay with 3 finished notes

03:35:939 (1) - i think moving the spinner to 03:36:307 would be a better idea as it would allow you to map 03:35:939, giving more of an impact and better feeling while playing