00:29:107 - 01:50:707 - section feels a bit sparse and it makes the 1/1 triplets feel a bit too dense, maybe fill up some of the 4/1s to make 2/1s the "base rhythm" 01:41:107 - consider making this section a bit denser to contrast with 01:50:707 -
sure, also added a 6 note pattern to emphasize the drums at the end. although i feel like its a little too dense now, matching the kiai, ill send you a dm about this