Rhythm choice in this section could be improved, you seem to be primarily actively following vocals, however there are times when vocals are left passively mapped like 02:04:762 - 02:05:962 - When other times you map these actively like 02:08:362 (4,5) -
You should try and be consistent with what you chose to follow actively or passively in rhythm, personally I like when you mapped the vocals all actively like 02:08:362 (4,5) -
02:12:262 (1,1) - could buff this spacing to better show the 1/1 gap bc how it is now could easily be missread as 1/2