00:00:312 - would be cool to see some kind of repetition with these jacks for pitch, especially for this block 00:01:645 - since it's so much longer and more pronounced
currently it just feels like random notes
also on that note it would be pretty nice for consistency if you stick to jacking in the same place eg. 00:00:312 (312|0,478|0) - vs 00:01:145 (1145|1,1311|1) - regardless of if u change anything up for repetition
00:06:645 (6645|2,6645|3,6811|3,6978|3,6978|2,7145|3,7145|2,7311|2,7311|3,7478|3,7645|3,7645|2,7811|3,7811|2,7978|2,7978|3) - keep an eye on your anchors some of them get quite long when they don't need to - this one in particular starts a bar earlier than when your density increases, so might be worth cutting it off somewhere like 00:07:478 (7478|3) - to col 3 instead
same kinda thing with the anchor on 00:09:311 (9311|3) - but i wont mention anchors anymore
00:13:978 (13978|1,14145|1,14311|1,14478|1) - i lied heres more anchor stuff!
if u don't have a reason for it to exist and its fixable then it probably shouldn't exist
(move 00:14:311 (14311|1) - to col 1)
00:33:478 (33478|0,33478|1) - agree with this being a hand, you map nearly every snare as a quad so this being a jump seems very out of place, regardless of there being no vocal here or not
for reference you map 00:30:811 (30811|3,30811|1,30811|2) - as a hand with no vocal so this should be too
00:35:978 (35978|0,35978|3,36311|2) - can probably just end all of these LN's on the red ticks instead tbh
the majority of the vocal is gone by then anyway it's just reverb left, and the release motion feels pretty good here before the climax at 00:36:978 -