00:33:271 (1,2,3,4) - undermapping on a diff like this is fucking insane lol should really map the bursts
00:41:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Im not sure how this can be humanly hittable by someone xD...
Maybe you could make it closer and more in a line ? while keeping the wingling effect without actually doing the movement?
00:43:518 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - this should maybe be higher spaced than the rest of the combo, due to the pitch change, all afterwards seems to follow this constant
01:39:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Shouldn't this lower space than the previous 1 and the coming one ? Pitch is clearly lower there than the rest , atleast to be you seems to follow a certain consistency with DS throughout this spacing
01:41:224 (3,4) - Feel like you could Ctrl+G this, seems more intuitive to play than going in circle and would make the entrance to : 01:41:401 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Less "weird" of an angle with a snap movement instead
01:53:400 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Feels like there's a miss oportunity to highlight the lower drums there , would give more constrat if it was more reactive i think
Shouldn't these change depending of the pitch? atleast be somewhat different in term of DS
02:01:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
you seems to be doing it at :
02:05:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,1) -
02:11:048 (9,10,11,12,1,2) - Shouldn't these be lower spacing like you did previously with lower drumroll to better emphasize the end of the section ?
Like here : 01:54:106 (1,2,3,4,5) - / 01:54:812 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -