00:17:231 - should be double here, like 00:15:540 and 00:13:850 these parts . owo
you can add a note uwu
00:18:076 (18076|0) - suggest changing this into 1/2 ln for vocal
00:33:551 (33551|1) , 00:32:178 (32178|0,32864|1) - 00:23:357 (23357|2) - same
00:45:131 (45131|1,45554|2) - should use notes instead ln to keep the consistency of this part xwx