Chocolat a la menthe

00:08:887 (1) - would end the Spinner at 00:10:122 - and start at 00:10:299 -

00:15:152 (3) - You should make this note red for consistency, (in order to be the same as 00:12:240 (4,5,6) - ) It will also fit the rhythm better

00:15:769 (1) - you can move this note to 00:15:593 in order to have a clean lil pause here. Having this blue note which is not representing really anything is making the next note (00:15:946 (2) - ) less impactant while it's on a white tick

00:23:799 (4) - You can make this note red for consitency, this is a lot of k in a row :)

00:26:887 (1,2) - weird having these notes be 1/6th when the exact same sound is a single 1/4 less than a second before at 00:26:534, i'd just delete 00:26:946 (2) -

00:26:887 (1) - You should make this note red in order to differentiate it with 00:27:240 (2,3) - . This is not really the same sound and this is kinda confusing to take those different sounds in the same bag

00:29:446 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern starting and ending on blue-ticks feels very out of place

Option 1: Delete 00:29:799 (7) -
Option 2: make the pattern go further until 00:30:064 (1) -

00:31:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can make this pattern ddkddkk to fit the pitch variation better

00:32:946 bit off having the 1/6th note in the oni but not in top diff

00:33:946 (2) - you can make this note red to have a more enojoyable pattern. Also, it precisely corresponds a little more to the pitch variation. The sound is closer to 00:33:769 (1) - than to 00:34:122 (3) -

00:46:299 (6,7,8,9) - you can make this kddk for consistency, 4 d in a row might be a lil too much idk

00:47:711 (8,9,10,11) - and then you can make this dkkd in order to keep that structure through your patterning. ddkk and kkdd patterns are good but they are not really impactant since the penultimate note is the same color as the last one.

You can make this note 00:49:564 (12) - blue to fit the pitch variation more accuratly. You will also end up with a stronger rhythm kiai :)

I understand your idea of pitch-mapping, but i would suggest to make 00:49:828 (15) - blue to change the pattern up at least a bit, and since the pitch is going up there it should still be fine for your concept

00:56:887 (2) - You need to make this note blue to :

1. Represent te pitch
2. Mark a break here, ending on a strong sound
3. For consistency, a lot of red in a row

01:23:269 (2) - You need to move this note to 01:23:622 to fit the music properly

01:30:681 (2) - this is kinda dense for a oni imo, atleast for a non kiai section. You can delete this note for a better rhtyhm sense and a lighter section

01:39:064 (1,1) - I think that those sounds kinda need to be mapped, a kddk 1/2 quadruplet should make it, it will make the transition between the previous section and this one smoother

02:05:446 (4,2) - You should make those two notes blue for consistency

02:39:240 (6,7,8,9) - same as 1st kiai