<a class="link link--white link--no-underline" href="https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1896636">Retaliation

00:01:482 这里四押是不是有点多？
00:03:882 (3882|1,3882|3,3882|0,4032|2,4032|3,4032|1,4032|0) - 这里三押接四押可能对于一个intro来说压力有点大了这一段不建议上四押这种强度。

2 years ago

已经全部是3啦> <

2 years ago

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00:01:502

00:01:502 -
好像不是简单的重复，感觉写成这样会清晰一点

6 months ago

00:03:602 - 移到3轨放错了> <

6 months ago

这个暂时是不想改x

6 months ago

唔，不行的话到时候再重申吧

5 months ago

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00:11:232

00:11:232 -00:11:157 - 漏个音

2 years ago

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298859/de19

2 years ago

唔，好了啦

2 years ago

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00:12:302

00:12:302 - 00:14:702 - 00:17:102 -
这里有音，而且Insane都采上了

6 months ago

不采有点空感觉

6 months ago

好啦

5 months ago

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00:14:082

00:14:082 - 这种类似的地方说实话我没有听到什么实际的音，这里dump感觉效果一般吧，不如用LN表达还能有个休息段。前面难度不至于搞得很难 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298864/6b10 00:12:882 - 00:11:682 - and so on

2 years ago

2 years ago

ln的话，想留个前面的难度（）

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪把那个交互换了（）

2 years ago

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00:15:639

00:15:639 (15639|2,15677|1) - 這倆應該是在1/6上

6 months ago

唔，移好了

5 months ago

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00:15:782

00:15:782 (15782|2) - 这个note应该上移1/8在1/4蓝线上而不是1/8snap
此外 00:15:282 (15282|2,15432|2,15582|2,15682|2,15782|2) - 对第三列的压力过大

2 years ago

好啦meow~

2 years ago

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00:20:982

00:20:982 (20982|2,21057|1,21132|2,21207|1,21357|2,21432|1,21507|2,21657|1,21732|2,21807|1,22032|2,22107|1,22182|2,22257|1,22332|2,22407|1,22557|2,22632|1,22707|2,22857|1,22932|2,23007|1,23082|2) - 食指要冒烟了这里。多点交互没有问题，但是最好要在四列里均衡一下

2 years ago

唔，时雨有提到啦——蕾咪稍稍一了一下

2 years ago

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00:30:282

00:30:282 - 这里开始真的要1/4拉满嘛，我感觉根本体现不出来音乐如果拉满的话。强弱变化全没了，就写的一股练习图的味，没有细节了。这里我建议跟随bass的变化适当中断一下。这样能体现音乐的感觉 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298871/d7c7 大概一节用LN断一下

2 years ago

00:33:882 - 00:36:282 - and so on

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪感觉44:682-48:282拉满就可以了[紧张]

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪试着写满了哦——

2 years ago

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00:30:282

[GB]Thaumiel

00:30:282 - 00:39:882 这一段两根食指的压力感觉明显比两根中指大

2 years ago

蕾咪把删掉的那个note放回去了【抱头蹲防】

2 years ago

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[GB]Thaumiel

其实我的建议是改一下排列，23轨交互有点多了（

2 years ago

Reopened by [GB]Thaumiel

唔，那蕾咪看看，怎么换一下排列

2 years ago

或者爬爬教蕾咪改[抱头蹲防]

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪换了一下位置awa

2 years ago

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00:34:744

00:34:744 (34744|3,34782|2,34819|1,34857|0) - 对错音了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298873/ebe1

2 years ago

00:39:544 (39544|0,39582|1,39619|3,39657|2,39732|3,39769|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298875/9cd7

2 years ago

这里也好了！

2 years ago

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00:34:877

00:34:877 (34877|0,34989|2) -
这里的1/7dump打起来手感不太明显，而且前后的音（大概）是在1/8上的，试试这样？

6 months ago

好啦

6 months ago

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00:44:682

00:44:682 - 键型太单调了，一直都是一样的，不如换一下 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298883/e25d

2 years ago

唔，键型这个没什么啦，至少不会错（）

2 years ago

不会错不代表一定好阿，歌曲的kick从一节一个到一节半一个很明显就是为了重视kick的强度了阿。而且前面全是js本来就不突出，然后你后面鼓变强了也不去突出鼓，那这图结构上就感觉很单一

2 years ago

整张谱这种类似的段落就这一个东西，多样性来说我不是很认可

2 years ago

唔，感觉可以啦——

2 years ago

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00:49:744

00:49:744 (49744|0,49782|1,49819|2,49857|3) - 整体上移1/8？

2 years ago

前面那个dump也是重音是在白线触发的前拉1/8会很奇怪

2 years ago

唔，这个也好了awa

2 years ago

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00:50:102

00:50:102 - 建议把1/4和1/6做一下区分，后面也是一样

5 months ago

唔，这个蕾咪感觉，应该更合适放在insane? ex这样写蕾咪觉得不是很够感觉【思考】

5 months ago

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5 months ago

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00:50:477

00:50:477 - 是不是应该在00:50:502 -
听起来是1/6

6 months ago

唔，就是1/4啦

6 months ago

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1/6的话蕾咪放慢感觉有一点点延迟，而且这里1/4的蓝线和1/6的亮紫线很接近

6 months agoLast edited by [GB]ReMILia 6 months ago.

00:50:532

00:50:532 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18298898/e916 平衡一下四轨压力，这里中间两个轨道压力拉满了

2 years ago

这里已经好啦——

2 years ago

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00:50:532

00:50:532 (50532|1,50582|0,50632|1) - 这种小拐角乱压力也会很大，本身会很难处理。如果这张图未来要有SV的话，这里会更难处理，改成一般的roll形态就可以

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪试着移了一下哦——

2 years ago

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00:53:852

00:53:852 (53852|3,53852|2,53927|0,53927|1) - 感覺這兩個聲音不用到doubles，想要表現的話我覺得用單手切指會好一點。

6 months ago

01:03:452 (63452|1,63452|0,63527|3,63527|2) -

6 months ago

01:13:052 (73052|2,73052|3,73127|1,73127|0) -

6 months ago

好了！

5 months ago

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00:58:332

00:58:332 (58332|1,58382|0,58432|1,58482|0) - 300交互杀人了

2 years ago

蕾咪稍稍歪了一下下

2 years ago

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01:07:182

01:07:182 这一小节应该是1/3snap

2 years ago

对好了哦——

2 years ago

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01:07:932

01:07:932 来个双押放这里？表现出来这个音？

2 years agoLast edited by V1do- 2 years ago.

放啦——

2 years ago

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01:11:082

01:11:082 按照你这里的思路你这里还是要写交互的

2 years ago

唔，好了（）

2 years ago

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01:13:052

01:13:052 (73052|2,73052|3,73127|1,73127|0) - 這裡聲音比前面的都小，但卻密很多，建議降低點密度吧

6 months ago

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19354883/26ad 这样可以吗

5 months ago

（> <）

5 months ago

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01:18:882

01:18:882 (78882|3,78882|2,78957|0,79032|2,79107|0,79182|3,79257|2,79332|1,79382|3,79432|2,79482|0,79482|1,79557|3,79632|1,79707|3,79782|0,79857|1,79932|2,79982|0,80032|1,80082|2,80082|3) - KKSK

2 years ago

01:22:382

01:22:382 (82382|3,82432|2,82482|3) - 尽量避免这种小拐角

2 years ago

唔，感觉可以了【紧张】

2 years ago

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01:26:457

01:26:457 (86457|2,86532|1,86532|0,86607|1) - 1/3

2 years ago

唔，对好啦——

2 years ago

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01:26:982

01:26:982 (86982|3,87032|2,87082|1,87132|0,87182|1,87232|2,87282|3) - 看不懂了，为什么大交互，这里dump的太夸张了吧

2 years ago

唔，换成叠叠哦

2 years ago

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01:42:039

01:42:039 (102039|1,102077|2) - 1/6

6 months ago

唔，好了

5 months ago

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01:46:332

01:46:332 (106332|0,106482|0,106632|0,106782|0,106932|0,107082|0) - 最好控制一下这种锚键的长度，这有利于控制难度

2 years ago

唔，已经变成对拍啦

2 years ago

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01:49:482

01:49:482 (109482|3,109542|2,109602|3,109662|1,109722|2,109782|0,109842|1,109902|0,109962|2,110022|1,110082|3,110142|2,110202|3) -
两个问题： 1.白线一个双押没有，这么大的鼓点很难不被注意到
2.这里拐角乱的难度远超其他段，乱里这么多子弹会十分难打

2 years ago

这里的渐进不会写[抱头蹲防]

2 years ago

不用所有dump都放1/8 视情况只有1/4 或者加点1/6也是可以的

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪试着改了一下下

2 years ago

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01:51:882

01:51:882 - 01:54:282 01:54:282 - 01:55:482 这里分开两段看
显然按照音乐的递进来说，后面一段的强度显然要高于前面。
那么看看这两段的配置：

前面一段用的是 2-2-2-1-2-2-2-1的重JS
2.后面一段用的是 3-1-1-1-3-1-1-1的轻HS
显然后面的强度反而低了
处理的方法：可以略微减轻前一段的强度，比如前面是中JS，后面是重JS
或者前面使用轻HS，后面使用3-1-2-1强度的重HS

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪稍稍改了一下awa

2 years ago

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01:55:482

01:55:482 这里会不会太空了，后面好多空音没有note

2 years ago

01:55:782 01:55:857 01:56:157

2 years ago

应该不会啦，这里蕾咪感觉就是这个样子

2 years ago

好啦——

2 years ago

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01:56:027

01:56:027 (116027|1) - 01:56:327 (116327|1) - 我覺得這兩個可以去掉因為這裡沒有特別的鼓聲，且這裡是歌曲的transition密度可以降低一點

6 months ago

唔，蕾咪这个对的是旋律【抱头蹲防】

5 months ago

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其实蕾咪这里，一整段都是根据旋律来扭的

5 months ago

01:56:382

01:56:382 还是之前的dump问题，这里建议还是鼓点优先，该double就double，并且避免一些1/6 1/8的过分堆叠

2 years ago

唔，蕾咪在白线+了一个note（）[抱头蹲防]

2 years ago

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01:59:982

01:59:982 (119982|0,119982|1,120032|2,120082|3,120132|0,120182|1,120232|2,120282|3,120332|0,120382|1,120432|3,120482|2,120532|1,120582|0,120632|3,120682|2,120732|0,120782|1,120832|2,120882|3,120932|0,120982|1,121032|3,121082|2,121132|1,121182|0,121232|3,121282|2,121332|0,121382|1,121432|2) - 唐突的对拍乱，有什么特殊的原因写这个吗

2 years ago

好啦！> <

2 years ago