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00:05:767 - really like these sections cuz they have good contrast with the rest of the map, since you use many wide angles and curvy/straight flow instead of sharp

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00:08:037 (8,9,10,11,1) - could add more spacing for these because they are much stronger sounds than all the triples before which are same spaced. would make up for better contrast between the patterns

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scaling a bit of this stream

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01:19:224 - sounds better if this sound is mapped. the song continues and has no break there, but the cursor movement stays still here waiting the 1/1 (skipping the red tick) for the upcoming 1/4s which doesnt quite fit to the song

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change to 1/2 slider instead and change stream placement

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01:24:900 (1,1) - these are too far spaced considering its 1/6 rhythm gap. since you never used 1/6 gaps before, you should make those objects overlap each other to indicate the dense rhythmical gap

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ctrl+g the slider and move a bit down the slider

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01:33:312 (1,2,3,4,5) - Im not exactly sure but I assume you intended to emphasize the vocals here, however the vocal lands on 01:33:537 - and not on any 1/3 tick which makes this pattern as a whole miss-representative as a whole. additionally, 01:33:412 (2) - has no sound at all in the music and the other audible sounds are all different which does not call for making them all the same with just circles. i strongly recommend to re-consider the pattern and the rhythm to represent the song in a better way. could do something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18332946/fa0d if you wanna represent the vocals

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01:53:712 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - could add more spacing for these because their rhythmical gap is much bigger with the 2/3 than the usual 1/3 that is being used for this kind of visual spacing before

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change a bit

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01:54:687 (3) - should be on 1/3 tick 01:54:712 -

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fixed

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02:16:219 (7,8) - could make 1/4 slider instead to cover the drums on the blue ticks

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fixed

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02:38:922 (2,1,1) - its visually spaced the same, but the rhythms are different 1/2 and 1/4. put the middle slider more up so the 1/4 becomes less spaced and the 1/2 more spaced. currently its very missleading

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fixed

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