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00:46:959 (46959|0) - 我怎么感觉这个就在16分线上

4 months ago

00:52:541 (52541|0) -

4 months ago

01:03:704 (63704|0) - 但感觉这个可以keep 放给flow的感觉

4 months agoLast edited by AelSan 4 months ago.

这个不是为了acc写音，第二个loop里面写了00:58:188 (58188|2) - 作为渐进

4 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

00:49:510

00:49:510
这个pattern稍微有点尴尬，如果你也有这个感觉可以用一个模糊的东西糊过去
我试着改了一下

上面三个是1/16 感觉更准一点

5 months ago

微调了一下

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

00:53:522

00:53:522 (53522|0,53609|2,53696|0,53696|1) - 我想要不要换一个更明显的排列毕竟这个音和前面也没什么太多联系，看你之前是00:45:150 (45150|2,45237|3,45324|1,45324|0) - 这里一眼可能看得出来00:47:696 (47696|0,47824|2,47941|0,48028|2) - 所以我觉得换一个排列比较好吧

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参考00:44:627 (44627|1,44627|0,44714|3,44772|2,44830|1,44898|0,44975|1,45053|0,45150|2,45237|3,45324|1,45324|0) - 和00:47:417 (47417|0,47417|1,47504|3,47557|2,47621|1,47696|0,47737|3,47824|2,47941|0,48028|2,48115|0,48115|1) -
这两段的bass是不一样的
keep

4 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

00:58:122

00:58:122 (58122|0,58188|2,58231|3) - 我怎么感觉更像这种东西

4 months ago

keep

4 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:11:095

02:11:095 (131095|3,131204|0) -
感觉这个为止，这个之前的几个交互不是特别准
尤其是02:10:681 (130681|3) - 离下一个note有点太近了

5 months agoLast edited by 7912 5 months ago.

微调了一下

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:12:970

02:12:970 (132970|3) - 可以改成rice，因为声部其实听不太出来了
而且如果挪到02:12:926 更准一点

5 months agoLast edited by 7912 5 months ago.

不是写的那个，但是重新调整了一下渐出

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:13:145

02:13:145 (133145|0) - 这里开始稍微有一点漏音，我觉得改了不影响整体你的表达

5 months ago

前面3个1/12
后面四个1/9
后面1/12

5 months ago

这里只写了左声道的，右边的加一起有点乱，keep

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:32:810

02:32:810 (152810|1,152854|0,152898|3,152941|2,152985|1,153028|0,153072|3) -
稍微有点突兀的难
削一个note就好了

3个1/7 3个1/12

5 months agoLast edited by 7912 5 months ago.

已修改

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:54:220

02:54:220 - 这里没有一个东西标一下那个一闪而过的旋律会感觉到空了一下
可以小改一下

5 months ago

02:48:639 应该是和这里对应的，keep

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:58:581

02:58:581 这里的pattern可以再斟酌斟酌

可以用LN带过去

也可以大道至简，直接用你经常用的这个排列标一下那个刮过去的旋律声部就行了

5 months agoLast edited by 7912 5 months ago.

keep

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

02:58:930

02:58:930 (178930|1,178951|0,179046|3,179060|0,179162|2,179191|0,179279|1,179279|2,179300|3,179395|1,179409|3,179511|0,179540|3,179627|0,179627|1) - 感觉有点太难了，听感大致上其实和之前那些东西是差不多的，确实有那个嗡嗡嗡的音但是很小，这里整类似叠的东西我感觉有点over了，小削一下吧

4 months ago

nerf了密度和排列

4 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

03:01:720

03:01:720 这里如果在左手食指加个note 不是正好给鼓当double了岂不妙哉

5 months ago

已修改

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

03:07:824

03:07:824
改改snap，让近似双压的东西变成双压去押鼓不是挺好，没觉得会明显损害表现力

5 months ago

另外这俩可以稍微稀疏一点，有点难

5 months ago

首先这个牛肉北丝起点就不在这另外把14的两个note往下拉就是想写鼓。最后这个不难因为后面更难
微调了一下排列

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

03:11:924

03:11:924 (191924|0) - 这个是不是放在03:12:011的？

5 months ago

不是，但是还是改了

5 months ago

Marked as resolved by [Crz]hinako1804

03:16:197

03:16:197
我觉得这里不跟着音乐停一下有一点奇怪，尤其是这里还正好是你pattern转向的地方，音乐停了pattern却在强调，打的时候有种违和感

我觉得这样更自然一点，但是这样会导致后面的pattern向后半偏移
所以直接把整个后面这坨往前移1/16，这样就平衡了

5 months agoLast edited by 7912 5 months ago.

你听错了

5 months ago