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00:02:148 (5,1) - 00:06:322 (5,1) - can u unstack those? its kinda awkward considering, after this part, u use this kind of pattern only for 1/4 rhythms or 1/2 gaps and not anywhere else except stuff like this 01:21:192 (5,1) - but i wouldnt rly compare those

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and also yes ik that since its a calm section and all that u could maybe justify it for wanting less movement but like it doesnt add much at all imo since the 0.6 sv, low ds and low rhythm density shows this being a slow part well enough already honestly

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i mean it does kinda show the huge melodical contrast between the two halves but like, opinions pls ???

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00:10:235 - Add another circle to follow vocal.

00:12:322 -

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idea is in 1/1 stack + it may be misleading for novices to play next sections where we have no vocals.

it's better to stick to the concept you're following rn

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also since the energy vocal is basically used as a sample here that isn't the main thing here, i just followed the instrumental more (the drums)

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00:13:627 (3) - A 3/4 slider might be better to follow the bass.

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same as #3574825/9605054

rhythm consistency in low diffs is very important for playability and 4mod score farmers

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00:52:757 (2,3) - Might want to move this away from each other for readability. It's not that hard, but i think the readability is quite poor in some stack slider like this.

00:54:844 (2,3) - 00:56:931 (2,3) - 01:42:844 (2,3) - 01:44:931 (2,3,4,5) - 01:47:018 (2,3) -

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i'd not say that's really hard to read because all these pattern have same flow.

also if they'll be spaced enough much to not be overlapped, there will be no contrast with patterns like 00:51:714 (1,2) - which is emphasizing drum, when patterns you mentioned is emphasizing synth

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01:28:757 (3,4,5,6) - Unstack and make a zig zag flow for emphasize(?)

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i'd refrain because these circles is spaced kinda too much already and if we'll make jumps here - they'll be too hard.

tldr subjective no change

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maybe ur solution isn't the best but i do think this jump is a bit much so i'll leave it open for now

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id prolly just do this maybe cuz then u dont have to unstack and the spacing is a lot smaller https://imgur.com/D6J7Ygt

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ok

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01:48:583 - This being the section with the most density and 1/4 doesn't really make sense considering the song is calming down, making the rhythm more passive would be a lot more fitting (you could follow the vocals more closely with 1/2 sliders on 01:48:583 - 01:49:105 -)

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i'm emphasizing the crazy vocals, also don't see how the song is "calming down??" when it's more intense than this section in the first chorus, having added these vocals to transition into break my soul, and even the beginning part in break my soul isn't that calm lol

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the vocals are definitely not on 1/4, if you wanted to emphasize them just normal 1/2 rhythm would emphasize them way better than overlapping it, while you miss out on emphasizing actual 1/4 like #3846838

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01:52:366 - In addition to the suggestion above, you could emphasize this through a more active rhythm (three circles) as it's the only 1/4 sound worth emphasizing.

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vocals (also bc i disagreed this would be way too overdone

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