01:33:265 (93265|0,93298|1,93354|3) - discuss with guest on which kind of grace to use, i think it's better to make them the same
01:33:298 (93298|1) - i think it is 1/8 instead of 1/12
suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18226671/5174
01:33:265 (93265|0) , 01:37:048 (97048|0) , 01:39:191 (99191|1) , 01:41:334 (101334|3) , 01:43:477 (103477|1) , 01:45:084 (105084|2) , 01:47:227 (107227|2) , 01:49:370 (109370|2) , 01:51:513 (111513|2) , 01:53:120 (113120|2) , 01:55:263 (115263|2) , 01:57:406 (117406|3) , 01:59:548 (119548|1) - same things
01:39:694 (99694|1,99694|0,99827|3,99827|2) - You can jack these doubles to fit the stronger drum and make this part more interesting
01:44:604 (104604|2,104694|3,104872|0) - delete them? they are ghost notes and there's no vocal to be covered by it.
01:55:497 - suggest to jack the jump only on strong drums like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18217871/6b14 , which i think is more fit to drums
02:09:827 (129827|3,129827|2,129894|1,129894|0,129961|2,129961|3) - too hard to play this jumptrill in HD diff, and I don't know why use 3 doubles here, the drums isn't very strong