01:08:379 (8) - 01:08:379 (8) - 01:20:588 (4) - needs cut or angle like there 01:15:094 (1)| | 02:32:970 <- to high spacing and make the pattern like here -> 03:39:862 (1) | 01:46:490 (1) - <- to high spacing | 04:00:792 - 04:24:513 (1) - to high spacing | 04:42:304 (9) - to - 04:43:001 - decrease the spacing over time a little bit | 04:00:792 (1) - after decreasing the spacing make the cuts more like cuts |
mostly fixed. the spacing at 04:00:792 (1) - is intentional and are not meant to be cuts but I'll definitely nerf it a bit.
I relly like the asthetic of your map but you have to work on these points |01:19:019 (1) - 01:18:408 (1) - 01:35:676 (5) - 02:17:885 (1) - 02:22:769 (1) - 02:27:304 (1) - 02:31:053 (8) - 02:28:263 (8) - 03:43:263 (7) - 04:22:769 (1) - 01:32:449 (2) - 01:43:350 (5) - feels missplaced | 03:33:408 (15) - why didnt you just finsih the curve correctly | 03:46:489 (9) - needs a cut like 03:45:443 (1) - | 03:39:862 - 01:08:379 (8) - make sharper angle and a rounder curve | 03:52:769 (1) - 03:53:118 (1) - 03:53:467 (1) - mirror the direction so the hole pattern feels smoother | 05:00:443 (3) - 05:09:513 - overmapped | 01:48:932 - this circle is to much remove it | 03:49:193 (8) - sharper curve |