Defection

00:14:736 (14736|3) - 这个键感觉应该去掉，前面每个有这样拐点的地方都有个音

00:24:486 (24486|3,24673|0) - these lns should end around 00:25:329, you can choose any snap nearby to simplify but they're currently far too long

00:25:986 (25986|0,25986|3) - end these at 00:26:361

00:27:486 - I can't tell what the short lns are representing here, personally I would use them for the pluck sounds every 1/1 but right now they seem to not represent anything

00:36:479
uhm... I think it would be better to have only one LN to make it easier to beat.

00:36:479
I don't hear 1/6 beat, I think it needs to be changed to 1/3 note.

00:39:479 i like these LN. :)

00:45:486 - if anything this section should have more lns because the new instrument is more of a held sound

00:52:229 (52229|2) -
I think it's a bit hard on the fingers to have to tap with one hand, so let's move the LN to the very left

00:52:236 - instead of 2 lns with a trill it would probably be better if you tried just straight 1/6 dump or something of that sort

00:56:729 (56729|2,56729|1) - how about moved to 00:56:729 (56729|1,56729|0) -

01:01:986 - to 01:03:486 - consisting soft and loud instrument. I believe making them all as double is not the best way to represent the music.

01:02:354 (62354|1,62354|3,62447|0,62447|2,62541|3,62541|1,62635|0,62635|2) -
01:03:104 (63104|0,63104|2,63197|3,63197|1,63291|2,63291|0,63385|1,63385|3) -
I think the jack here is too hard to beat and should be a regular trill.

01:05:548 (65548|2) - technically speaking this is 1/8 earlier but you can keep it if you want

you can make 01:06:486 - as double for piano chord

01:07:986 - jumpstream is way to overemphasizing for this section

01:08:736 - just a suggestion to represent the piano more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18137566/d3d1

01:15:579 (75579|1,75767|1,75954|1,76142|1,76329|1,76517|1,76704|1,76892|1,77079|1) - your choice of having one held ln and a jumpstream at the same time led to this anchor. you probably should choose one over the other

01:17:079 - 长音应该是在这个位置的 还有 01:17:361 - 01:17:829 - ， 01:18:251 - 这个貌似还比格线早..

01:17:447
I think the jack here is hard to hit sober, so change it?

01:37:229
I think it would be better to use a normal staircase placement.

01:40:041
Can you emphasize the sound of something like pow pow pow?

01:49:979
I don't hear 1/8 beat...i think it need to be changed to 4/1 and 1/2 notes.

01:49:979~01:50:354
1/4 notes?

01:52:979
just change 1/4. but 01:53:729 has 1/8 beat. keep it,but it is hard to play, so please refer to this example
example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18077944/ea92

01:58:229 (118229|0,118229|2,118275|1,118322|3,118369|1,118416|0,118510|1,118604|3,118604|1,118650|2,118697|0,118744|2,118791|3) -
There are no notes to emphasize, so place 1/2 or 1/4 notes.

02:01:979
it is 1/4 notes. there has no 1/8 notes.

02:15:486 - 最后的面条是要对氛围或者长音吗，但是02:18:486 -02:21:486 - 02:24:486 - 02:25:986 - 这些地方就一个长音也做的一样，感觉有点意识流，我觉得应该整点不一样的