00:35:558 (56) - consider putting a don here? imo it makes the transition into the next part and the 1/1 gap after 00:34:331 (46) feel better to play
I agree it might be a bit more clean to play but imo this goes aginst how every measure ends with d and k alternating in that section so no change
00:36:649 0 - i would recommend putting a circle or doing smth here so there's not a weird break. imo fits better with your progression especially since you mapped a triplet at 00:37:604 (69,70,71)
00:52:695 (1,2,3,4,5) - consider changing this pattern to a singular don at 00:52:695 followed by a group of 4 circles on the 1/3 starting at 00:52:876 ? i think doing something like this would feel/play more naturally
smth like this mb https://imgur.com/a/wFDr8Bt
honestyly this pattern is a bit more difficult to play rhythmically but whatevs the rhythm in the song is akward too