with circles or idk i think would also fit pretty cool what u did later 01:00:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
tbh i think it's fine as is now cause 01:00:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this more intense and emotion vocals, jumps on 00:50:729 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't really feel okay to me
00:55:829 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think the jumps here are kinda for nothing cus theres nothing that strong on the that warrants them
Personally id change 00:55:979 (3,4) - with a 1/2 slider instead
tbh switching 00:55:829 (2,3) - with 1/2 slider sounds way better so i did this instead!
also 00:56:129 (3,4,5) - as jumps follow cool growing guitar moment here