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00:11:824 (1) - you mapped vocals here but didnt for 00:13:769 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - . Since its the beginning of a song, a following slider section would be nice to feed into 00:16:364 (1) -

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guitar is more prevalent at 00:13:769 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - i would like to emphasize that for contrast

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00:21:553 (1) - why don't you make a bump here? it's an important sound in the music

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01:16:039 (1) - kidda same?

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01:38:742 (1) - yeah there's a bump here technically but it's super easy to ignore in gameplay

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made a bump on 00:21:553 (1) - . as for the others, i'm not actively following the guitars in the first half of the kiai bc it's not as intense as the 2nd half (referring to 01:16:039 (1) - )
01:38:742 (1) - shold be fine tho, i wasn't aiming for sharp movement in this part of the song.

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00:23:337 (5) - Too separated from the previous note, the sound is not as intense.

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00:56:743 (2,3,1) - the same with these three with respect to 00:56:418 (3,4,1) -

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it's fine rn since the spacings mentioned match the given energy of the song.

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00:32:094 (1,2) - Too far apart they should be closer together and 00:32:094 (1) - sounding louder should have a bigger distance from 00:31:932 (1) -

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i think the sudden and large-distance launchoff effect 00:32:094 (1) - gives for 00:32:256 (1) - works really well since the song here explodes with a new section here. also the distance between 00:31:931 (1,1) - shouldn't rly be a problem since circular flow is broken off here pretty roughly

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00:32:580 (1) - NC unnecessary

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did smth different

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00:42:067 (1) - happens before the guitar note (too early) & 00:42:229 (1) - happens after the guitar (too late)

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sounds fine on my end?

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01:01:769 (2,3) - It would be more comfortable if instead of the slider with circle to use a slider with reverse in 1/8

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plays fine to me

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01:12:188 (1) - the spinner here can be remove to map the guitar in the back. i feel like a spinner here breaks the flow of the song and kinda resets it right before the kiai of the song.

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flow break is intentional here for emphasis.

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you could def more with this stream than just a single curved line 01:21:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

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yea i reworked it

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01:21:796 (8,1) - this transition is kidda scuff tbh xd, i don't see what's wrong with moving the later part of the stream like 20 pixels to the left

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did something different

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I think you could distance more the notes of the stream 01:23:175 (1,2,3,4) - because the guitar is more intense and achieves a note with much more height than the previous ones.

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yea

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maybe just me but kiai 01:34:851 (1) - 01:45:229 (1) since it's also part of the main diffspike

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not objectively needed

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01:52:282 (1,1,1) - increase spacing between these three notes, since these are the last circles in the map, this could add more of a finale-esk ending.

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nah guitar pitch slowly drops here

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