01:47:680 (107680|2,107959|1,108239|0,108332|2) - I feel like these transition notes here take away from the impact of the separate minijack bursts by making this feel more consistent intensity than the song gives it.
I'd suggest just removing them (kind of a nitpick though, fully up to you)
02:28:860, 02:29:605, 02:35:568, & other similar sections - A couple of these fast bursts have a different feeling compared to most of them (like 02:31:841 & 02:34:823), and I think it would benefit this section's overall structure (and each burst's playing feeling) to standardize how you map these bursts and keep it consistent
ex)
making them all like 02:31:748 (151748|0,151841|0,151888|2,151935|1,151981|0) and having a fast roll go towards the mini jack before it
