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00:19:534 - i think it'll be better if the spinner starts here and put a note in 00:18:139 -

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00:24:767 - I'd suggest you avoiding such 1px ovrlaps https://i.imgur.com/gRMuiqB.png
also to be fair the whole section could be mapped without any overlaps

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removed overlaps and cleaned blankets up ty

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00:38:023 (2) - could be spaced out more since it's 1/1 rhythm
00:38:546 - and this nc isn't necessary imo

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00:56:511 - no sound here so I'd suggest removing circle on the timestamp and stacking 00:56:686 (4) on 00:56:162 (3)

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also I'd suggest moving 00:57:558 (2) here https://i.imgur.com/pmloLJd.jpeg and remaking the whole pattern using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/JMshUdy.png so it will look like that https://i.imgur.com/xCPVXV3.jpeg

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it look better ty

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I'd suggest spacing out all of your 1/1 bursts cuz stacking 5 circles on top of each other is kinda old fashioned
timestamps: 01:24:767 01:31:744 01:35:930 01:37:325

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yep done

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01:38:023 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - it seems like there should be a buildup here and imo it can be more intense. because the player is only clicking on the beat + there is very little cursor movement so it feels underwhelming. If you want to keep this rhythm i think you can gradually increase the spacing. personally I would also change the last reverse slider into two 1/4 sliders or a 5-note burst

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increased spacing + added 5 note burst

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01:39:418 (2) - I'd suggest turning it into reverse kickslider and working on you structuring (tbh you wanna polish all your map)

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yeah I thought the hihats stopped, kicksliders definitely work better there.

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01:39:767 (1) - wanna turn this to a slider

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01:41:162 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest changing rhythm on your kickslider and placing 2 slightly above triple after it
https://i.imgur.com/RIdpWxX.jpeg

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probably you should redo also 01:42:558 (6,7)
01:45:174 (3,1,2,3,4) - this is fine so don't change it

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didnt exactly place 2 above triple for consistency, but changed the rhythm to emphasize kicksound.

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01:41:162 (1) - imo it's kind of awkward to have the super strong snare on the sliderend, especially since with the same rhythm at 01:45:261 (1,2,3,4) - you mapped the snares on circles (2,4) instead (which works better)

i would probably change the rhythm to smth like this https://imgur.com/GN1x9oF

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done(ish), used a slider at the kick sound

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01:45:261 (1,2,3,4) - would space out the (2) more since you spaced out the (4) and they're the same sound. the current pattern is cramped together and imo harder to read as well

smth like https://imgur.com/jqau0zA

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01:48:488 (2) - wanna make it straight like this 01:48:313 (1) -

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yeah on second thought the "curve means reverse slider" thing isnt very useful, made them straight again ty

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01:57:558 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'd suggest turning all of these into reverse kicksliders

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yep done

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02:44:738 (1) - the woosh sound continues all the way until 02:47:441, so not sure why you stopped the spinner early.

spinners dont require active clicking so i would advise against representing drums with a spinner

i would probably keep mapping the drums until 02:46:046 then have a spinner from 02:46:133 to 02:47:354

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03:14:650 (1,2) - this nc is unnecessary, just remove it

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03:26:860 (1,1,1,1) - could be better structured

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should be better now

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03:31:744 (4) - I think it starts where it ends right?
you can put 1/2 slider on 03:31:744

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think 3/4 works better tbh

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03:51:627 (1,2) - could be 1/1 slider
also 03:51:627 (1,2)

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done, ty for modding the slow parts I suck at those lol

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